In-class assignment 2 - common errors	

I am writing to complaint about the 14 days trip to Europe provided by your company.

The room was very dirty. On the other hand, the air-conditioning didn't work.

The hotels were very bad on this journey.

I had a very disappointed holiday.

The price was included accommodation and food.

All of the hotels didn't have private bathrooms

I need to share the bathroom with other.

We had to pay the fee for the bus.

I had called your staff  for confirmation some points.

She confirmed  me that the hotels were near to the downtown.

All of the guides did not speak Cantonese.

I had called your staff, Rebecca Lau, four times.

Each time she has been rude and unhelpful.

It would appreciate if you would look into this matter.

I demand to refund my money back.

Thank you for your attention.

In-class assignment 2 - common errors	

I am writing to complain about your 14-day trip to Europe.

The room was very dirty and the air-conditioning didn't work.

The hotels were very bad on this tour.

I had a very disappointing holiday.

The price included accommodation and food.

None of the hotels had private bathrooms

I  had  to share the bathroom.

We had to pay the bus fare.

I called your office  to confirm some points.

She confirmed that the hotels were near the city centre.

None of the guides spoke Cantonese.

I called your representative, Rebecca Lau, four times.

Each time she was rude and unhelpful.

I would appreciate it if you would look into this matter.

I demand a full refund.

I look forward to hearing from you.