Level 4 

In-class assignment 2 - common errors

1	Refer the captioned product.

2	I am writing to complaint about your product

3	About the accommodation, the hotels were very uncomfortable.

4	For the food, it was inedible.

5	The room was very dirty. On the other hand, the air-conditioning didn't 	work.

6	The hotels were very bad on this journey.

7	I had a very disappointed holiday.

8	It would appreciate if you would look into this matter.

9	I demand that you refund my money back.

10	Thank you for your attention.

1	Refer the captioned product.
	With reference to the above product...

2	I am writing to complaint about your product
	I am writing to complain about your product

3	About the accommodation, the hotels were very uncomfortable.
	With regard to* the accommodation, the hotels were very 	uncomfortable.

4	For the food, it was inedible.
	As regards the food*, it was inedible.

5	The room was very dirty. On the other hand, the air-conditioning didn't 	work.
	The room was very dirty. Furthermore, the air-conditioning didn't 	work.

6	The hotels were very bad on this journey.
	The hotels were very bad on this holiday / trip / tour.

7	I had a very disappointed holiday.
	I had a very disappointing holiday.

8	It would appreciate if you would look into this matter.
	I would appreciate it if you would look into this matter.

9	I demand that you refund my money back.
	I demand that you refund my money.

10	Thank you for your attention.
	Letters in English do not end with a standard phrase. 
	In the case of a complaint letter in which the writer is expecting some
	follow-up, 'I look forward to hearing from you', or 'I look forward to 	receiving your reply', could be used as closing sentences.

* 	as regards, regarding, with regard to