In-class assignment 1 - books - corrections	

I choice a book named Who Moved My Cheese?	
I would like to introduce a book to you it called Who Moved My Cheese?	
I have read a book that the title is Who Moved My Cheese?	
The story is talking about a young girl in America.	
It describe about a family living in London.	
Delia is a young, beautiful and kind girl.	
Delia was got a fever and she was death.	
Finally Gilbert was dead by Raymond.	
Some sentences are very wonderful.	
I always enjoy detective fictions.	
I am very enjoyable for reading this book.	
The book is more attractive than the other books.	
I liked this book it is because it is exciting.	
The story is funny and very easy understanding.	
It is suitable for every people who have interested in crime.	

Possible answers	

I chose a book called, 'Who Moved My Cheese?'	
I would like to talk about a book called, 'Who Moved My Cheese?'	
I have read a book called, 'Who Moved My Cheese?'	
The story is about a young girl in America.	
It is about a family living in London.	
Delia is a beautiful kind young girl.	
Delia got a fever and she was died.	
Finally Gilbert was killed by Raymond.	
Some passages are wonderful.	
I always enjoy detective fiction.	
I enjoyed reading this book very much.	
I liked this book more than other books I have read.	
I liked this book because it is exciting.	
The story is funny and very easy to understand.	
It is suitable for anyone who is interested in crime.